May 14

Metaphor poem

You might think I’m just
a quiet,kind,and polite
fifteen year old boy
But I know I am more
way more than that
not a sloth or turtle
not a rabbit or cat
A grizzly bear
a grumpy grizzly bear
When I’m in my territory
I roar at siblings and take over
But when I step into the human
world I act like a little cub
that Is all sweet and hollow
My big huge claws attack
any enemy that I feel
Is a threat to me
When spring comes around
I rise from my big muscular claws
again and again
a quiet,kind,and polite
fifteen year old boy
Is a grizzly bear
A grumpy bear in a territory
that I call my own

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Posted May 14, 2015 by cgriffin1 in category ELA Writing Portfolio

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